Journal #1 Review

The MISSION2010!!! post came straight from the heart. Nothing in the post is fictionalized, and everything just came naturally. I had no trouble coming up with an experience to describe that fit the requirements of the assignment. I feel like the language I used is just what came into my head as I was writing the piece. Honestly, I had no trouble describing my vacation, maybe because it was very recent and still fresh in my memory. My first post was just a free flowing explanation of how I thought the trip changed my life, and that's why I used the language I did.